Local resident Mabel McCullough is waking up to the first day of her ninety sixth year today. The morning after her birthday party caused drama that a twenty one year old would have been proud of.
The First United Methodist church women’s group was the source of the drama. They put on the party for Mabel and decided to squeeze ninety five candles onto a single carrot cake. Guest Eddi Carlin said the cake then resembled more torch than cake. Mabel’s credible effort of blowing them all out caused enough smoke that the smoke alarm was alerted.
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Geez, you've got way too much info here. Try again. (5/10)
In broadcast, first you say something (briefly) to get my attention. Then you tell me what happened.
For broadcast, you also need to write it in ALL CAPS.
For some ideas on how to approach this assignment, take a look at the broadcast leads posted by Brandon, Kate, Dorsu and Marilyn. You can find links to their blogs on the right side panel of the class blog.
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